#What's your thoughts?

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ashen spindle
cold meteor
ashen spindle
plain moat
# ashen spindle

Pretty good design wise. But I wouldn't sell my kid.. so in my opinion the words are not true.

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(if I had one)

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(it's an example)

ashen spindle
worn sundial
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the art is great, but the main text is less contrast than the bg newspaper, and my eyes immediately tried to read the newspaper first, because it's a plain black text
the main text looks like a secondary because of the lower contrast
i would honestly try to make it vice versa, so the main text can stand out from background

ashen spindle
tidal dove
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I really like it it's so creative!

ashen spindle
brittle bridge
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Really good! Design + Art, you made a nice provocative poster, I have only two points.

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First one is the spacing, as the text is very close to the edge look squeezed

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Second are the colours, where I think money cant buy everything the contrast is too low, as my eyes goes directly to the pink and black don't