thoughts
#Fries Poster
unborn junco
olive wadi
I like the aesthetic feel!
The paragraphs in the corner though seem too long, I don't know if most people would look at it
also the bottom left corner paragraph is a bit too close to the edge of the fries
the Hot "sticker" also seems a bit off... I think the placement of it could be a little different
daring trout
I agree with this feedback so far. Here are some quick thoughts:
Overall the aesthetic is nice, and the colors work together. The general placement of things is good, but could benefit from a bit more space between each thing. The two biggest offenders here are the two blocks of text at the bottom left and top right. I'd try redugin the character count in these to make it more concise, which will make it easier to give more space. The "hot" sticker looks good, but I'd try giving the text a little bit of an angle too, since it's placed on an illustration that also has a tilt
unborn junco
olive wadi
the word because is split, making it look a bit awkward
unborn junco
which one
olive wadi
it's in the bottom corner paragraph
olive wadi
yea
prisma urchin
This is like woodblock print style
unborn junco
where did you get this French fries illustration ?? is it ok to ask ?
Uhh
Make it myself
Why?
Wasn't that hard
ionic totem
well it looked good that's why 😅 thanks for telling.
ionic totem
okay, my bad sorry.
prisma urchin
The fonts and graphics match. And the colors are in harmony.
unborn junco
My teacher says
It's too flat
It need depth
Like shadows
I met her 2 times and I absolutely have no idea what to fix
prisma urchin
What are those almost black streak marks? Maybe add more shading
unborn junco
Which one
solar venture
Looks yummy
unborn junco
Yummy