Advise Please !!

[pliant whale]

I am a beginner so please give me honest feedback and help me to improve.

[wraith crest]

(im also a beginner designer btw)
nice poster overall! like how the shoe is popping out of the page a lil bit.

still, this poster can pop out a lot more. it doesn't have to be flashy, yes, since the shoes arent flashy themselves. but i feel like you can really build up that contrast, especially for something like an Air Jordan.

id begin with the grey background. its a bit too dull and uninteresting. i would go for a background that really contrasts the shoe.

also, i dont think the jumpman in front of the nike logo is doing much work for you. The nike wordmark is bold, big and strong, and the jumpan logo just seems to dull it out and obscure it.

the arial like font at the bottom is also too boring. the text is also taking the whole bottom (left to right) width of the page, which is just too much space for a poster like this.

overall, i think you got a good start, you might just need to change a few things to really make it work

personally id take a look at some of the existing nike ads for shoes and try to understand what worked and why

[pliant whale]

Thanks brother 😊

[flat estuary]

Pretty cool but can give it some improvements such as:-

first thing is the line spacing while telling about the shoes

second is alignment i think it should be centered

last but not least is the shadow of the sneaker u made the shadow pretty cool but it should be like a fading one !

I hope it helpsssssssssssss