Portfolio Feedback plz

[idle matrix]

I need feedback about content structure & Design plz
https://www.behance.net/gallery/232718417/TaskMaster-Task-Management-SaaS-UI-UX-Design

[idle matrix]

Plz

[reef mica]

Hi

Do you want feedback on the current project you worked on?

I will be able to guide you better

[idle matrix]

Yes plz

[reef mica]

Ofc I can

Will take a look and provide you with my notes

[idle matrix]

I think the points I have mentioned are not enough.

in the case study

[reef mica]

I think that the points you have mentioned are quite good and well thought out

I have taken a look at your project and the presentation was quite good. There were couple of things that I wanted to highlight to you

1. Check typesetting for all body copy
2. Missing out on the wireframe sketches
3. Would be good to present your website design on a laptop screen and mobile

Other than that you did a pretty good job 😊

[idle matrix]

Glad u like it

for the second point Why is it preferable to put sketches ? Do they give an addition?

[reef mica]

Thank you ❤️

[reef mica]

If you add in the sketches then the users will see how you have designed the website in black and white before you reached the final stage which is adding color, type

Hope that makes sense

[idle matrix]

i got u

[reef mica]

Perfect

If there other points that you want to clarify or any work you want to share feel free 😊

[idle matrix]

I appreciate your effort thank u so much
I have other works that are not yet ready for publication

[reef mica]

You are most welcome ❤️

No Worries

Take your time

[hallow bough]

Hey there, the UI seems solid, even the presentation is intuitive. My only feedback is to improve wireframe section. It feels like you did that section only for the sake of presentation.

[wild galleon]

that's a great project. looks polish and minimal. well done

[hallow bough]

Wireframes are not meant to be done just for the sake of doing it. Other than that, yeah solid.

Final though, as someone who uses Jira myself, I can relate to the product. But I have never heard of a freelancer using tools like Jira. I am not 100 percent; convinced on adding Freelancers as a target audience.

[wild galleon]

oh, that's a great point. that's actually something for him to consider

[hallow bough]

Also since you have multiple type of users like Freelancers, PMs, etc, how did you make the decision on creating one persona. To be honest, it is generally recommended to create 2-3 personas in general. But it is not a thumb of rule. But in your case, Freelancers and PMs can have varied Goals and Painpoints for sure.

[hallow bough]

Agreed. It was just a thought. That's all.