Feedbacks please?

[halcyon pebble]

idk but i feel really badddd bcz of the alignment issue T^T

[runic knot]

Now i made this like that

[halcyon pebble]

Much better

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[prime void]

@runic knot Compared to all your previous designs you are improving it well great work!!!

[astral sparrow]

@runic knot, nice design. You can keep links in all caps only; the rest of the textual elements can be sentence-cased for better readability. Otherwise, it appears like you're shouting on the screens, highlighting each word.

[runic knot]

@astral sparrow @prime void @halcyon pebble does the second section match to the landing page first section?

[halcyon pebble]

Again the alignment issues!!
And also the visual hierarchy messed up

Bcz of the bold big font u used in the 2nd section!!

The UI principles aren't followed!!
Lacks visuall balance

[runic knot]

I tried to make tention trick using off balance the header in the second section

[halcyon pebble]

The spelling 🥲

Still a lot of allignment issues

And why use 2 images ...what is the purpose of using those

What are you trying to convey?

[runic knot]

For example one is the designer and the second work of designs 😂

[halcyon pebble]

I suggest you to create a different section for the work

Where you can show projects effectively

[runic knot]

Ok i will do that.

[runic knot]

I am still a beginner and i have just started to practice

[halcyon pebble]

Sure!!
And focus on align ments!!

[halcyon pebble]

I get that by seeing your work you shared and ... Believe me ... You aren't alone .. I was the same 5 months ago

[runic knot]

How can i get better at creating compositions? It is the most hard and the rest is easy to master

[halcyon pebble]

Lemme tell you the most easy step to learn something!!
Get inspiration - replicate - manipulate!!

It's that simple but

Soon u will need to learn from the basics again!! Bcz ... It's the process that can't be skipped

[runic knot]

So i have to discuss web designs based on the priciples and naturaly i will memorize patterns and then my instinct will be activated to make good compositions?

[halcyon pebble]

Yeahhh RIGHT!!!

[runic knot]

So in 5 months i will be as good as you are at design i hope so

[halcyon pebble]

Well .. probably if you are curious like me or even sooner if you are desperate!!

[runic knot]

I discuss 9 designs a day and then try to practice. And what you do?

[halcyon pebble]

But yk what I'm still not good yk .. i still lack .. most of the things and I'm doing my very best to improve

[halcyon pebble]

😶 wow ... I just explore out of curiosity!!

[runic knot]

It is just matter the time and i will done it.

[halcyon pebble]

Sure!!