Car Brand Poster!

[rocky dew]

Give Me Feedbck On The Color , Typography , Font Etc.

[lime harbor]

I ... I don't know... It feels odd

😶

[rocky dew]

Like tell me what should be changed or improved?

[lime harbor]

Idk I'm not a Gfx Designer 😶

[rocky dew]

Bro like poster comes in Gfx

[cedar nova]

the colours for the title are blending into the background, whilst the poster tells a very weird story

the sentence at the bottom right feels off because it has been cut out from the car, making it feel off

not too sure what the logo/graphic is at the top right behind the porche lettering, but it feels off

it gives more horror vibes due to lack of colour and saturation

maybe think about what the type of audience you would like this design to be and then research what they like design wise, e.g. colours, fonts

maybe also think about the type of fonts that you will use as well on the poster as well

[keen shale]

oml bro, can you give me more detail on what your plan or idea was, the poster does not exactly make sense as why is there a car in a stable 😭 , lemme try remaking that but I wont use the same background but will use the same theme

[rocky dew]

K then

[rocky dew]

What about this , it is of the same theme , also i use adobe express therefore i don't have a lot of tools to enhance it

[topaz stratus]

Maybe add the same stroke on the images in the circles of everything else!

[vale tree]

I think you could improve on general design principles. If I’m looking at your poster I don’t exactly know where to look at first or what’s going on. That’s called hierarchy.

The value of the title’s too dark. Also the size of the text beneath is too small. Is that amount of information needed for a poster?

These the things that I noticed first.