#Kids Story App Onboarding

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sterile anchor
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@lilac dawn how did you create these app design i really want to now

thorn igloo
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the SKIP button at the top is not visible clearly

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make it visible

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also the space between the picture and the title is too much

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the size of the text in CTA- continue is small, maybe increase it

glacial swift
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The Design Looks pleasing... Bcz of the color choice and the onboarding illustrations... And just some tweaks to fix little visibility issues and spacing ( like the other guy said 🦆 ) and you are good to go!!

glacial swift
thorn igloo
compact horizon
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The text isn't horizontally centred properly

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Maybe add a faint shadow, or a bold border, along here so the header banner doesn't fade/blend in with the background like it does:

surreal lake
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put the text higher near the illustrations

uncut pecan
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I love the designs! Did you do all these illustrations by yourself?
In the middle one, I feel like the text isnt centered. Like someone else also said, i think the pages would look more harmonious if the tiles were placed a little higher.