Please give me your feedbacks

[hexed falcon]

You should highlight the button.

The design is plain, simple and clean which is a good thing but it's lacking "taste" or "style" or to be precise "direction" when I look at it, all I know is that it's a coffee shop website ok and that's it. I don't "feel" anything but design is much more than just what we see with our eyes.

Focus on adding more "depth" to your designs. Overall well done.

[tough badge]

maybe change the colour of the 'ORDER NOW' button so it naturally drives the viewers eyes towards that :D

[fleet cliff]

Thanks for the feedback, and thatnk you that you liked my work.

Yes main thing is that it is coffee shop website but what else i need to add ? Can you bring me some example for me to know it exactly?

[slender stump]

you can add some shadows in the product and highlight the cta

and try doin 3-4 more variations

[hexed falcon]

Okay so, I'm actually on my phone rn hence the weird ss lol.

If you look at the current starbucks website, they used certain imagery, colors, and typography. As a user when I look at it, the "design" "feels" fresh, refreshing & joyful to me and that is their (the brand's) message. That is what they want their cutomers to feel about their products. That is their direction. And since I've connected to the brand, I feel tempted to try their products atleast once.

There you have it. I tried my best to explain what "Depth/purpose in designs" mean. And that's what I think your design is lacking.

when it comes to web designing, brand guidelines plays a major role actually and no you don't always have to build a brand first in order to design a website, you can just ask chatgpt to write a brand guideline for you.

Or another simpler way would be that you can just try writing down how you'd want the viewers of your design to "feel" when they look at it e.g, happy? Confused? Sad? Joyful? Mindblown? And then you try to design something that resonates with those feelings. You may even use that to look for inspiration like you can go to pinterest and search up "playful websites" "mindblowing websites" etc.

Designs with purpose and direction always turn out to be more impactful and great.

[fleet cliff]

Thank you❤️.

But i also think that my version is more fun and it shows more energy and also there is more mouthwatering picture of sturbucks rather than in real one and it also has description.

I have used exactly the same text and iformation besides header which says the best coffee in the town and i just redesign it, by the way i am begginer and i am still learning web design, and i have not finished the course yet

[hexed falcon]

You're welcome.

Yes, yes I totally understand that you're a beginner, I can see that, the feedback I gave is also beginner friendly. Maybe, you might not have been able to grasp it completely but as you advance in your skill, maybe one day you'll know what I meant.

And yes, your version maybe more fun and energetic but that is how "YOU" feel about your design. Not everyone who looks at it will feel the same.

[fleet cliff]

The main thing is custumer, and you have to make design which is more acceptable for them and fun and easy, and who i showed it every one liked it when you said not every one, and so i don't have visual taste at all, everyone knows what looks good

[hexed falcon]

All I'm gonna say now is that, you'll understand & learn as you advance. That's it.