Swiss Design Feedback

[hallow quail]

I'm practicing swiss design and made this poster. I'd like to get some feedback please. Thank you in advance! 😊

[eternal geyser]

Great start! I think just make sure the leading is consistent. Some of your smaller text feels more spaced out than your mid-sized text. I would also look at making the margins consistent between the top-bottom and left-right of the page.

I think you have a great feel for the grid system. Keep playing with it and I'm sure it'll become second nature.

Viel Erfolg! 🇨🇭

[fast pumice]

I agree with @eternal geyser your leading needs to be consistent as well as your margin from all sides. Also it would be nice if you could play around with tracking to give some breathing room between the letters.

Another thing that I wanted to highlight is that I felt your poster has a bit too much of negative balance so you might to balance that out.

This is a really good way to practice your design skills 😊

[shut flume]

Ooh what font is that?

[hallow quail]

Montserrat type family 🙂

[shut flume]

thanks for enlightening me! btw great design :D

[hallow quail]

thank you 😁