#food ad design

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hybrid spruce
indigo parrot
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Logo - To close to the edge
Headline - better contrast
10% - too small
Footer - better font, better spacing

Those points can help you improve your design

hybrid spruce
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do u have a font suggestion , its really hard for me to find a good font

hybrid spruce
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what about now

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@indigo parrot

indigo parrot
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bit better, but I fell you can improve more

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Try to look how they did the composition, the colours, show the promotions, aligment.

hybrid spruce
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alright

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im still a beginner xD , i do have some problems in chosing a good font and some other stuff

indigo parrot
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try to see how the market do, what is the tendences

hybrid spruce
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okay

hybrid spruce
noble lagoon
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Reduce the amount of fonts. Keep only 2-3 fonts at max, 3 is also too much

hybrid spruce
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are u talking about the upper text ?

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amazing delicious burger ?

noble lagoon
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The overall design is too cluttered

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Try using montserrat or bebas neu

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Fonts

hybrid spruce
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ok

indigo parrot
hybrid spruce
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thanks i appreciate your help ❤️

noble lagoon
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Logo is too much cornered

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And limited offer too

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Try to change their places

placid shell
# hybrid spruce

I suggest
Figure out ... How can you showcase both [ LIMITED OFFER AND 10% OFF ] Together!!

And relocate the text that is under your website!!

Give some Air to the footer ... And Free Delivery!!

Figure out the Position for logo!

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Utilize the Spacing Efficiently!!

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You can also... Put the Head ... A little bit Behind the image !! (Optional)

hybrid spruce
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alright ill give it a try

placid shell
hybrid spruce
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thank you ❤️

hybrid spruce
noble lagoon
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I would still recommend to work on the bottom part

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Otherwise everything’s fine

placid shell
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Redesign the bottom part entirely!!
And relocate the text under your website... Relocate the Free Delivery!
... And another suggestion for you
Add the pricing together with the special offer and discount... And pace it near your 🍟 and relocate your logo to the Top right!!
Try it and see if it looks alright
And you are good to go !!

hybrid spruce
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Aight

hybrid spruce
placid shell
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MUCH BETTER NOW!!
now you can increase the size of the logo
And the pricing/ offer and discounts

Also
I Appreciate you took our feedback and worked on it all day i see ... So keep up the Good work and start with the relaxed mind !! 🍁

hybrid spruce
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i hope this one is good xD

placid shell
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Ofcourse You can Tell that by looking!!

shadow copper