I need feedback

[obsidian tundra]

Hey everyone! I’m still pretty new to graphic design, mainly coming from an audiovisual background (video/audio), and I’ve been working on this EDM poster design.
I’m actually quite happy with how it’s turning out so far — especially the mood and colors — but I feel like it’s still missing something. Something feels a bit off.

I’d love any feedback or advice you can give — whether it’s about the composition, the typography, the balance, or just the overall vibe.
Thanks in advance! 🙏

(Also open to suggestions for elements I could add — this is for a techno event.)

[quiet ruin]

quite good ..try to give little shadow effect to the chains cuz they look like edited out of no where

[lone cypress]

very interesting work, the only thing worth working on is the fonts

[obsidian tundra]

thanks! ill try some differennt ones!