#Fleet Maintenance Portal | Product Design Sprint

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drowsy tusk
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Hello ....
This is a product case study I worked on during a sprint organized by a club at our college. It was one of the first case studies wherein I tried to complete the process in detail as per my knowledge or time permitted.

project link: https://www.behance.net/gallery/216400683/FleetSure-Fleet-Maintenance-Portal

If you happen to take a look, I'd really appreciate any feedback or suggestions. I'm still learning, and your thoughts would be very helpful.
Kindly reveiw
@paper nymph @glass geyser @hushed heart @scarlet stag @dreamy pewter

main flame
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Looks good, but I fell the spacing needs to be improved

scarlet stag
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Please don't ping a bunch of random people

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Just wait for a response like, literally everyone else.

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It's annoying, it's not a good look for the first thing you do after joining a server, it rarely even helps, since as you saw people will give feedback without a ping anyways, and makes me "not" want to review because you're essentially trying to "cut in line".

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(that's my feedback)

hushed heart
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Looks good imo but I feel like changing the dark blue background of the sidebar to darker blue might look even better

hushed heart
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And a tip for behance posts: don't make a long image for all content in your case study, you can separate images and section in different images, so for example you have a screenshot or a mockup of your design, and I wanted to zoom in, so I clikced on it and I couldn't because the screenshot was in this long image

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I like what you did here with one image

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but in the next they should be separated

dreamy pewter
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I feel obliged to give feedback since you mentioned me 😅 , but dashboards are really not my expertise. But I think you don't need to write "Home" at the top because the user can see that "Home" is selected in the left menu bar. I don't understand why you have a schedule in the home section when there is a separate menu for "schedule" on the left menu bar. Anyway, the color scheme is nice. Keep it up, brother.

oh! And I think the toggle buttons need redesign. Traditionally, horizontal padding should be twice the size of vertical padding. Your toggle buttons look weird in my eyes.

Now that I've entered the link and scrolled through your case study, I have some more opinions I'd like to share. I don't think recruiters have that much time to thoroughly read such a detailed case study since they have to process tons of portfolios. And they might get tired of reading a traditional case study like yours since everyone is following the same template. So, my advice is to keep it short and straight to the point, and add a personal touch. The visual or UI of your case study is perfect; it's the experience or UX aspect that you need to work on, in my opinion. Hope this helps.

drowsy tusk
# scarlet stag Please don't ping a bunch of random people

I wanted to apologize for tagging people earlier. I genuinely didn’t mean to cut in line or annoy anyone—I felt that i wont be getting much inputs since i was a random person in this server, i tried to see similar projects, and tagged people who gave inputs on those projects.

drowsy tusk