Landing Page redesign

[magic cove]

It's a pity you cut off the cookie which is a selling point

[sour torrent]

Yo where's my cookie

I paid for the cookie I will eat the whole COOKIE

[craggy osprey]

Thank you for your feedback, i will take account of it

[craggy osprey]

Thank you for your feedback, i will take account of it

[sour torrent]

Any ways, make the dunkin rewards text heading a bit fat

[craggy osprey]

You mean little bigger size?

[sour torrent]

Yea and I mean fat

fat

[craggy osprey]

But i know that overlapping is a design trick and why is that mistake?

[craggy osprey]

But i know that overlapping is a design trick and why is that mistake?

[sour torrent]

....

Wdym by overlapping? Show some images

From where you get that

Ahh

I see

The cookie is cut by edge

But no

[craggy osprey]

So it should be overlapping but main picture is going to be visible? But what if it little bit overlap

[sour torrent]

You know that it does not applies for everything

Right?

[sour torrent]

Dude, your product should be shown full not half half

[craggy osprey]

Why?

[sour torrent]

You have to make people's mouth water

[craggy osprey]

Ok

That one is better?

[sour torrent]

😭

[craggy osprey]

I know it is not the best at all neither good

[sour torrent]

I mean, it's good, but keep your donuts as the center attraction

They want to be attractive to donut

Then you give call of action

[craggy osprey]

What about that one i think it's awesome