#Feedback for Landing Page Concept for Food Festival

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frail vapor
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Hello! ☺️

So, I've been trying to learn Figma since it looks like my company is wanting our design team to use Figma from now on. I wanted to create a landing page as a tester and came up with this design!

Completely conceptual. But, I would like some feedback on the overall design. I don't have anything specific in mind, just wanting to see if there are any areas of improvement

peak axle
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If you are facing any difficulty or have any doubts, feel free to reach out 🥰

frail vapor
spiral totem
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You know what? Maybe the heading design is alright, polishing it and fine tuning can make it looked 100x better than plain old white text

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Try these

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The side desgin (cloud on the red background) is ok, but you can make it small and some more designs

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You donjave spacing issues though need to fix it, as zeenat mentioned above

peak axle
dry berry
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On the hero section, heading and sub heading not aligned . And you can try some bright colors. Regarding info, the date and location can be bold and prominently visible and font has to be changed based on the theme. I like the patterns and images. Nice work! Keep going!

frail vapor
# spiral totem Try these

Thank you for this! I’ll try using this reference to improve the heading! And yes, I’ll work on my spacing!