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scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:12 PM

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Yeah, okay. So make the line underneath the sphere longer to architecture to carry out the same effect of the right image. Also create the wrap around in "Creating"

Or you can really create a circle thats white/off white and put the text in it to make the dramatic of "sphere"

I think overall your graphic is fine, I will say it is missing something that - probably more spacing/white space, but it really depends what you are trying to achieve. Like are you trying to create a dramatic way to present your product or a more minimalist way?

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You can also captialize "different" and make the weight bolder so people can really see the difference. Again it depends what you are trying to achieve.

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:17 PM

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scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:18 PM

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The line is a bit too long, I would fade it at the start of the start of "ecture" you don't want the line to be touching the other line.

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:21 PM

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scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:23 PM

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Now I feel like it's too crowded. You need a balance of white space.

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There is too much going on, what do you want users to do?

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:26 PM

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lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:26 PM

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scarlet knoll Now I feel like it's too crowded. You need a balance of white space.

srry bout arch thing

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these buttons aahhhhhhhh

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@scarlet knoll check this one

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:30 PM

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lean cloak

I think this is much better!!

two things:
If "learn more" is a CTA button, I would place it center underneath the text outside.
The subtitle text is a little hard to read, I think the weight needs to be at least regular italic not light italic

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I would even play around with the idea with bold subtitle and make the text smaller.

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:32 PM

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damn

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:32 PM

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scarlet knoll I think this is much better!! two things: If "learn more" is a CTA button, I w...

did it

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:32 PM

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That's a different way to use know more, but since you have sharp edges, it looks weird for the button to be circle

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:33 PM

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ur right it does look weird

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scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:35 PM

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I still think there needs to be more space. Like, the line is just too close to the picture on the right. Have you thought of just make "know more" bolder and taking away the line?

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lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:36 PM

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i feel like this is banger

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:36 PM

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scarlet knoll

that is good idea wait

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:36 PM

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So the picture on the right has breathing room

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:40 PM

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@scarlet knoll check this one

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it took time to align it properly

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:42 PM

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I think that's much better!

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:42 PM

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what do u think i should add to the topp

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:43 PM

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Nothing? The white space is good.

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:43 PM

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scarlet knoll I think that's much better!

does it look proffesional ?

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:43 PM

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lean cloak does it look proffesional ?

If you play around with the text a bit especially with the subtitle, yeah!

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I think it looks much better vs what you started with! 0_db_FluffleConfetti

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:46 PM

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my connection was bad

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sorry

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:46 PM

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scarlet knoll If you play around with the text a bit especially with the subtitle, yeah!

thank u

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btw @scarlet knoll

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hows this logo

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:47 PM

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lean cloak

Y'know you can get more feedback from others not just me if you post in the #943196929813282857 and create a post there!

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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i feel like ur much better, and ur instatnt ofc

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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The logo is simple, but I don't really understand the purpose of it. "Cruch"

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or is Arch?

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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its a concept company called arch

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architecture

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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I see, you use the eiffel tower as an 'A'

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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yess

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:48 PM

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Honestly think you can do better

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:49 PM

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(actually i dont usually like using symbols instead of letters but i have tried)

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:49 PM

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scarlet knoll Honestly think you can do better

in the sesnes?

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:50 PM

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lean cloak in the sesnes?

I feel like this is a lazy way, pardon my words, but there isnt really any creative output in the logo and it doesn't go well with the aesthetics you are trying to achieve (from what I can see) from your website layout.

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:50 PM

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scarlet knoll I feel like this is a lazy way, pardon my words, but there isnt really any creat...

non the website is diff the logo is diff

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they are different concepts, sorry if it confused u

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:51 PM

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Oh

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I see okay. So what is this brand?

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Tell me more

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:51 PM

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it focuses on complexity and old style srchtecture

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my spellings uhhh

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:52 PM

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lean cloak it focuses on complexity and old style srchtecture

and then its also kind simple yk what i mean?

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:52 PM

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yeah,

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I see your style being minimalistic but dramatic

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:52 PM

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but i think the tower is too complex

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:52 PM

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I just think you can do better!

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:52 PM

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scarlet knoll I see your style being minimalistic but dramatic

yes u guessed it perfectly ig

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really?

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:53 PM

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yes

lean cloak Mar 18, 2025, 5:53 PM

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can you come on dms?

scarlet knoll Mar 18, 2025, 5:53 PM

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Have you look at other inspirations?

#like just anything u feel would make it