#Need feedback for logo design "SiebelMotion"

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amber raptor
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Hey guys, I'm currently working on my own motion design brand "SiebelMotion". I've done some digging in logo designing and this is what I've made so far in Illustrator. I've tried to combine the M from "Motion" and tried to make it in a mountain. I'm still not 100% sure if a mountain will fit, because it is a brand for motion design and animations. Not only that, but I am also really doubting which one of those looks the best, I think The bottom left and the upper right looks the best... But the upper right has not really the M in the design. What do you guys think and what will you give as feedback on this design?

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amber raptor
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@glad patio Could you maybe give me your opinion about those designs?

glad patio
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Sure thing, personally I really like how you explore different fonts and kernings, the first one from the left seem to overcommunicate, which might not be good, the one I like the best from these options is the left one on the second row. You should also explore more minimal ways to incorporate a mountain into the logo, like taper lines with softer corners(opposed to the sharp corners of the tip of the mountain and the snowcap) but these are just coming from personal opinions. Hope I help you a bit!

amber raptor
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Thanks! I'll play around with it 🙂

dreamy heart
amber raptor
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Thanks mate! What do you think about the house style?

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I also left a little gap between the mountain and the L, do you think it looks a little better? @dreamy heart

dreamy heart
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Yes, the text is more readable

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I think the mountain is good, but i first thought this is a logo for a brand or business with mountain theme

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Also how to make good names for logos? Im not making logo design, but i dont have much ideas other than connecting 2 words

amber raptor
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I mean the logo looks good in my opinion, but it does not really match with a motion brand...

dreamy heart
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When i think of motion design, i think of shapes, colors etc, so maybe replace it with shapes?

dreamy heart
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Experiment with shapes

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Or take a look at gsap website, their website theme matches to montion design

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amber raptor
dreamy heart
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Oh ok

amber raptor
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how it looks, colors and theme

dreamy heart
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Its really good

amber raptor
dreamy heart
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And blue?

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Like the accent color and secondary color?

amber raptor
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not done at all

dreamy heart
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Nice

amber raptor
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Working since a small month on this website

dreamy heart
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Ill check it

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If you need web design for this website i can help

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Even for free

amber raptor
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The animations on the website on literally every single piece with text is also a bit buggy, I think I just have to use codes for that instead the animations inside wix

amber raptor
dreamy heart
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Sure

amber raptor
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I mean can yo ucode?

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I do have a kind of design

dreamy heart
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I can code, design, framer

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I can do small tweaks for free

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I also do SEO

amber raptor
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This was the design I made in Adobe xD, my first website design

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took over 13 hours💀

amber raptor
dreamy heart
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Ye

dreamy heart
amber raptor
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I'm first going to finish the design of my website (in wix), can I contact you after? Because I'm almost 100% sure I need to code the animations to get it clean haha

dreamy heart
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I learned coding for 6 months, design for 6 months

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And framer is easy

amber raptor
dreamy heart
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And i can blender a bit

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And spline

amber raptor
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Do you have any example of previous work?

dreamy heart
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Lets go on dms

amber raptor
dreamy heart
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Ask for a feedback

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Also can i put it in my portfolio?

amber raptor
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You can 💯

dreamy heart