#Portfolio Feedback

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lament elbow
polar roost
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How do you make it where when you press on resume it brings you to the file? Also i like the colors not super overwhelming! Make sure to fill in some of the place holder text though! (The reviews/statements still have the blank info) i like the rounded elements tho in it!:)

lament elbow
storm sphinx
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The text here doesn’t really mean much, it’s very generic and doesn’t say anything unique about you

Also the services scrolling by makes it so unless someone sits there for 15 seconds (not gonna happen) - they won’t know everything you do and might have a misrepresentation of who you are

If also probably get a more professional headshot if you’re able to

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The body text here (and the other projects) don’t add anything meaningful either, it’s basically just repeating the title says and that a portfolio assumes.

Also the ‘Recent Project’ doesn’t make sense because it’s above the whole section heading. Is it meant to be saying the Nobitex is your recent one? Or are they all recent? Does it even matter which one is recent? Who knows

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lament elbow
# storm sphinx The text here doesn’t really mean much, it’s very generic and doesn’t say anythi...

Basically, I wanted to display my projects near the hero section so users don't have to scroll much to see them. All of the projects shown are my most recent work. The main issue is the UX writing, at least from my perspective.

You're right about the content, and I'll improve it in version 1.2, along with the About Me page, so people can get a better understanding of who I am.

The services section also can be a bit faster, I get that. But I think it's very direct and upfront that if you are looking for these, I might be able to help, you know?

Btw, thank you for your feedback I'll make it better mate, have a good one ❀

storm sphinx
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Yeah I don’t see anything wrong with the placing either, I was just trying to push you to think harder about what text you want to show. Everything should have a purpose, and if you can take stuff away and it doesn’t make a difference - you should change it or remove it in general.

I’m not saying including your services is wrong, I just don’t think it’s a good thing to include in a scrolling element. If someone loads on your page, they might only see one or two before scrolling past when they would have been more interested in something that was temporarily off the screen. So I would make that a static part that displays them all at once

lament elbow
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and yea about the ticker, what do you think about making it faster so it takes less time to scroll fully?

storm sphinx
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If someone loads on your page, they might only see one or two before scrolling past when they would have been more interested in something that was temporarily off the screen. So I would make that a static part that displays them all at once

bitter iron
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Hello i spotted a probable typo in the scrolling list of services in desktop mode

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runic ermine
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I don't think you mean for the instagram hover to be this way, other socials hover snap from the center, IG one is wonky

lament elbow