Feedback on readability

[sour dust]

I feel like it looks too cluttered and you will just look over it, too overwhelming to read

[sour dust]

Trying this now, I think it looks better and more readable

[vital falcon]

more line-height pls.. p much theres a standard recommended line-height in general

[sour dust]

Thank you! This is 1.4 already iirc, but I will increase it to 1.6

[tidal raven]

Youre right, no one will be reading this, its too overwhelming (speaking from experience).

• youre starting with "on page X" which user cares about the least. Focus on value add (what they will be getting). That should be highlighteed.

• Too many "ill show you" and "youll learn"s cluttering the space.

• Id go with a traditional table of contents with hyperlinks so that the user can click around.

[sour dust]

Thank you and you could very well be right. I’m not in charge of the actual text written however so my main focus is to increase the readability as is