Looking for some feedback to improve this infographic

[grand osprey]

There are some things I’m a bit iffy about, like some of the colors. Choosing the orange icons within the blue was a pain because it wouldn’t pop out, so this is what I have at the moment. I chose blues and oranges because those always made me think of something educational for some reason. I think the small text might need to be bigger so it’s readable (the lorem ipsun isn’t final). Not too sure about the font, maybe it should just be sans serif entirely? The steps going clockwise I think is a decent idea, since most people follow a clock in that direction.

I’m down to hearing some thoughts on improving this piece.

[sudden bolt]

yes the description text is too small, need more line-height. reckon no need to bold that too. maybe just normal text instead of caps would be more readable for it

also justfiied text… for readability

[grand osprey]

Does this look a little more readable? Maybe I should increase the width of the artboard as well just so everything doesn't appear to small?

[sudden bolt]

yeap! more readable now

[sudden bolt]

dont forget justified text

[sudden bolt]

and less spacing between heading and the description imo.

[grand osprey]

Kind of like this?

[sudden bolt]

yeahhh something like this, but not sure why the paragraph text which u justified looks funky. what program r u using for this poster lol

[grand osprey]

Illustrator. And yeah, when I first used justified text, I noticed it. The first paragraph looks all right, but I'm not sure what happened to the other ones.

Wait, the scaling caused it. Just changing the width to make it a little wider fixed it up a bit.

[grand osprey]

Did some adjustments with the new text in place. Are the two text boxes to the side a little too close? And is the justified text a bit weird?

[sudden bolt]

letter spacing looking weird in new description text imho

oh prob cos of the justify. p sure there shd be a setting to get it sorted

[sudden bolt]

cant completely help w this cos my illustrator app got removed when reformat my old lsptop lmao

u cld try see if chatgpt wld be able to advise

[grand osprey]

I swapped around the artboard so it's more horizontal. Let me know which one looks most appealing and readable.

[sudden bolt]

in terms of info hierarchy, i prefer the second!!

oh i mean the second i think

create a schedule -> start a timer -> take a short break -> extend your timer ?

https://www.interaction-design.org/literature/article/visual-hierarchy-organizing-content-to-follow-natural-eye-movement-patterns

[grand osprey]

The first of these two pictures makes more sense if you're going by a moving clock, but I do agree that the second one is probably much easier hierarchy-wise.

Are some of the icons a little too hard to read? Two of them more like outlines compared to the other ones.

Do the two icons to the left here look better and more readable here, or do you peeps think the previous look for them was better?

[sudden bolt]

ngl i missed this out and didn't realize that the icons style were inconsistent LMAO

filled icons def look more eyecatching