It has been around a year ago I made a logo or something.
Till today, I had nothing to do and made this for a friend his eSports organisation
Someone whit constructive feedback?
#eSports Mascot
civic hill
near token
yellow: the soft corners look kinda off to me, maybe experiment with making it a harder edge that drops down?
green: the curvature looks kinda off, like not smooth or unnatural
teal: you can probably tell
red: feels too thin or pinched off, needs more breathing room
the concept is cool, it might be slightly too complex if you try to scale it down to a smaller size, but i think it works. If you plan on using the graphic in the background (the one without the text) I would definitely simplify that, looks a bit too much like a rib cage than a tornado
for the stroke on the "STORM" the top of it where part is straight but other parts you have the curvature from the letters themselves is at kinda an awkward spot. I'd try either exaggerating the stroke from the curvature of the letters, or just keep it straight at the entire top (like on the bottom of "ESPORTS")
Natural looking curves in a logo are really hard to get right, I've tried before and it was more difficult than I thought. The Indianapolis Motor Speedway logo is a great example of how to do it right, and I'd look at how all the bezier paths line up in it to make it look cohesive
not a continuous curve, two different paths but looks good when you zoom out
