Critique my UI

[acoustic swift]

Mock UI project for an order-before-arrival coffee shop chain. I focused on hierarchy, spacing and colour. Let me know what can be improved 👍

[celest flame]

Hi @acoustic swift , you did a great job on this. I have some suggestions on this.

[acoustic swift]

Thanks, what are the suggestions?

[celest flame]

about the second and third screen

you can add one more screen between them showing the cart items (which also let's users to edit the items) or you can add edit option in the third screen.

and on the last screen you are showing the progress of the order with those dashed lines. I feel like you could add those lines one by one in the previous screens as well (which shows the progress of the users in those respective screens)

These might be minor changes, these are things I noticed and can be modified as per my knowledge.

would love to know more about this project.

[acoustic swift]

A way to edit the cart is a good idea. The progress bars are there throughout, but the contrast might be too little to notice them lol.

[acoustic swift]

Sure, like what?

[celest flame]

I mean if the user moves to next step you can mark the completed step black, as you arr marking all the steps in the last screen

[celest flame]

My bad I thought your going with a case study😅.

I am new to this ui ux, looking if anyone is open to a Collab for case study. If you started any I'm open to Collab.

[acoustic swift]

Cool, I'll keep that in mind man

[wooden oasis]

you did a great job Alex, I just wanna point out some things which can be better.

1. The overall color of this app is very grey, with the palette consisting of black, white and brown I think it can be a fire combination if pulled off correctly, unfortunately it’s not the case for this, I suggest you looking up some references of this color palette to have a better sense of using colors

2. the top navigation is too big in height, while the progress bar doesn’t have any padding, which make it hard to recognize for user. You can work on the spacing for the UI to be mote consistent

[acoustic swift]

Thanks, yeah I can see what you mean about the colours. I'll keep in mind the top bar issues for future projects too. Cheers for the feedback!

[elder fable]

looks like apple design, super clean, usable, wouldn't say unique

[acoustic swift]

That's great to hear, exactly the kind of vibe I was going for. Thanks for the feedback.