I designed a landing page for a fictional sunglass brand. I would love to hear your thoughts on it
https://www.behance.net/gallery/163935311/OCULUS-A-Sunglasses-Brand-Landing-Page-Design
#Sunglass brand landing page design
red horizon
rugged echo
it's a bit cookie cutter tbh. Seems like a fresh template. I suggest adding fonts with more personality. I also recommend looking at other sunglass websites to garner some inspiration.
As much as I hate to say this, you need to make it pop. It seems like you pasted some ui components and left them un-styled.
It takes time to really get an eye for it, but everyone has been at your stage once and soon you'll be able to reflect and see what could be improved.
red horizon
it's a bit cookie cutter tbh. Seems like a fresh template. I suggest adding font...
Thank you for your feedback. I'm planning to add more elements, or add some depth. I wanted to keep it simple. changing fonts will definitely helps