#y’all Feedback needed!

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compact furnace
mellow kettle
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i like simplicity. it's yours,right ? superb 🤩

compact furnace
fiery rapids
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@compact furnace hey! I viewed your project and the concept is really cool and meaningful! I think it might be a good Proof of Concept. In terms of text, I'd probably try to be a little more brief but since the topic is serious itself it might be quite challenging 😄 Also check the spacing between project sections. They seem consistent but too big at times. I think you did it to balance big texts? Nice job overall! Feel free to give your opinion on my project too! https://discord.com/channels/697694775561945109/1063143704203902976

languid gale
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Is it called Cleaner or Greener?

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What’s the purpose of personas here? How were they used, how were they researched, how did they affect the design?

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Why would they use this app? As you say in the beginning, most of us don’t find environmental communities, so why would they find this app? With that opening as a description of the problem, you better present some kind of insight about that or argue why this solves that problem. If you don’t have a solution, that’s not a good thing to start with.

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The design system section feels unfinished. Is black and white both primary colors and “else”? What is the grid supposed to show?

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Why is the goal to create a more professional community? Why is that relevant? Why isn’t it mentioned under target audience?