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cursive marsh Oct 11, 2022, 8:03 PM

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https://www.figma.com/proto/XchVEpf6TVD2ghOh3ZNQbu/Digimonks-website?page-id=0%3A1&node-id=85%3A194&viewport=901%2C392%2C0.19&scaling=scale-down-width

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Digimonks website

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cold flower Oct 12, 2022, 1:54 AM

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The visuals and hierarchy look pretty good, the gradient is a nice touch and everything looks inoffensive to look at. the man I have with it is this I don't really understand what they're saying in the values sections, this might just be me but I don't know what all this spiritual wellness stuff has to do with mints and might come off as a little shady depending on who's reading it.

cursive marsh Oct 12, 2022, 7:49 AM

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cold flower The visuals and hierarchy look pretty good, the gradient is a nice touch and eve...

Thanks for the feedback, I haven't created the content its from the person Im designing it for!

eternal socket Oct 13, 2022, 3:14 AM

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More breathing room and spacing for the values would be nice

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its a big cramped block of text atm

cursive marsh Oct 13, 2022, 8:06 PM

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eternal socket More breathing room and spacing for the values would be nice

thanks, are you referring to the body text on the grid or all of it?

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