#Someone tell me if this song I wrote sounds good ,need feedback and if the piano is okay

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drowsy basalt
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This is a bit blunt but, here's what I think about it:

There's a lack of harmony, and clarity on the vocals need work. Ofc part of it's also because of the piano being loud, but your vocals need work as well, as a listener I can't comprehend the lyrics.

inland current
drowsy basalt
inland current
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Probs be around 5pm I record (I have school)

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And I also play violin now so yer

inland current
drowsy basalt
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Sounds great, I'd love to hear it

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What do you think of this fingerpicking?

I heard it from an anime and I learned it. It's so simple yet really nice.

inland current
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Sounds great 👍 I’m not that great at guitar but sounds good