costume ideas for future contests!

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Please give feed back!

[fallen oak]

Cool 👍

[harsh stump]

I wish I had more vocabulary to fully express how beautiful is Beth in this dress
||Beth is always beautiful anyway 👀||

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Omg tysm you guys are so nice😭😭❤️❤️❤️🙏

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I made a sprite for her should I make a weapon

[harsh stump]

it would make the costume more complete but you are the artist so you do what you want 👀

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Yeah true but I have nobideas on the weapon idea😢

[rugged heart]

umbrella

[fallen oak]

Agree

[harsh stump]

oh yeah an umbrella would be nice 👀

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OMG THAT'S AN AMAZING IDEAAAKZKEZJK😍😍😍

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Here's the sketch

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Some new ideas

[harsh stump]

The first one is really good
Rue berserk is wonderful too
Not fan of the second art but who am i to judge after all 👀

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Tysmmm!!

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Also I'm open to critique on the second one so if u have any indes on how to improve it I could testvthem out!!

[harsh stump]

the drawing is good, I'm just not fan of the priest thing

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Ohh

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Berserk rue feel free to critique

[harsh stump]

Here is my critique : I saved this masterpiece on a private server to keep it and I will also share it to my alliance (90 people) and name its source of course 👀

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OMG TYSM!!

[pulsar cliff]

Hello ! Mwehehe critique timeee
The character in cell shading contrasts and clashes with the blurry background, the moon is a bit too big in a way that doesn't enhance the character's presence. I like the idea you were going for, but maybe a bit more negative space could make the whole thing blend better.
It's not clear what the red lines on Rue's body are supposed to be, from what I'm guessing they're the moonlight reflections. The way that it's done doesn't convey volume since the directions aren't coherent. Light reflections are really difficult for any artist, but choosing a direction should help the whole thing look even cooler.
Also, the way that the moon is faded kinda implies that its light would also create faded reflections. If that's not what you were going for (maybe you wanted to draw the red lines independently from the moon ? Idk), then the red lines should follow an entire different pattern and logic ; here, they make Rue's body look flat.
The colours should also be chosen differently. A bit more variations of red for Rue would be nice and could create volume if placed correctly. The sky however is too clear and dull, the night sky should be darker and more intense in terms of saturation (not like an indigo or something, but less grey), so that it doesn't look flat as well. Also a good gradient would be very nice.

I do like what you were going for with the background tho, with the slight variations of colors to convey very transparent clouds reflecting the way more intense moonlight, that would look very cool. But it needs more contrast with the sky, and the moon has more of a creme/yellow hue. That's the contrast element you should use. To do that, the moonlight's shine should be organized in two layers : one blurry shine, very small around the moon and very intense ; and another shine, this time very large and diffuse, but more transparent. That way you can attract the viewer's eyes directly to the moon, and then Rue who would clash very[...]

[...] nicely, with faded lights in a redish hue. This would also work with more negative space, and that should create a more visually interesting visual.

On a last note : I do really like this piece, the idea is very interesting, and the idea of clear contrast between Rue and the background is really cool ; it just needs a bit more work put into the choices you made for everything, so that you can enhance what's already in here. There would be no criticism if there weren't a potential here.

There you go, here's my critique hehe

[harsh stump]

https://tenor.com/view/book-school-paper-books-anime-gif-19222226

[harsh stump]

this comment was offered to you by your eternally unsatisfied perfectionist spirit 🤗

more seriously I don't know how it would look with more work on the colors and shades but I like its actual simplicity and these red lines do the trick 🤌
I shared the art and people loved it
I don't say that you should not listen Kaku, I don't doubt that you could always find a way to improve your drawings, but I was just saying that they are already good.

[harsh stump]

90 people in the guild but around 300 - 400 on the server

[pulsar cliff]

Bruh

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OMG TYSMMMMMM!!!!
THIS IS RLY GOOD CRQITUQE I WILL TRY AND MAKE IT NICER!!!!

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AND TYSM TO!!