One of my first times editing a video with voice over. Any feedback would be great! I know the editing isn't the greatest.
#Any feedback is appreciated!!
clever adder
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One of my first times editing a video with voice over. Any feedback would be gre...
The voice over is decent, same with your narration, all I would suggest is to make it to where the gameplay is the center focus when you are showing the footage. I would add more visuals, for example, you mentioned there was a zombie girl, so I would do one of those shots where it’s a blank Minecraft world and you have a zombie girl avatar, and have a zoom in. Make it look ‘cinematic’ I can try to find an example of what I mean if you want me to. You could also implement some talking head shots at some points so it’s not just the gameplay so it makes the videos more easier to resonate with.
I think you could also benefit from some sound effects to emphasize key points, a riser.
And also I wouldn’t put your face in the thumbnail, I think for the video you are trying to go for and this is just how it goes from what I’ve seen, the videos of this kind of nature don’t have the peoples’ faces in the thumbnail.
clever adder
So it is an edited down version of a like 4 hour stream, which is why the game play is but also isn't the main focus. I can agree it could be more cinematic, with more sound effects. But I don't know what you're referring too "girl zombie" even rereading over my script theres no mention of this, unless I was slurring my words