Please give me your honest thoughts on my intro so far as well as a thumbnail I made for the video

[delicate rover]

https://streamable.com/amw6a3

[abstract thunder]

The shake on the kane & lynch logo is too much. Too wild for how small the shake is. Lower the speed a little

and that's about

the rest is pretty solid

[delicate rover]

Thanks man, ill get onto that and fix it

[delicate rover]

https://streamable.com/nl5arv