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#Paymove Landing page design
sour condor
timber rose
That d in send looks like a sign to me
And this needs some breathing space for sure.
Don't include everything on the home page only .
And reminder to contrast check for sign up button & 100% satisfied.
sour condor
@timber rose thank you
waxen mist
+1 to what Jitesh said! I don't think this is too much info for a home page, but you definitely need some breathing room between your hero text/image, the stats underneath it, and then the key benefits section underneath.
Your hero text is also potentially bigger than it needs to be relative to everything else! And I'm not sure you need both the subtitle text below it, and the text above it. I would focus on one main message and use just the hero text and a subtitle to say that
timber rose
+1 to what Jitesh said! I don't think this is too much info for a home page, but...
I thought this was the preview of viewport height & not exactly the full home page ( hence I said it's too much for the first glance without the user having to scroll)