covert sluice
Hello guys, so im trying to make a lifegain token deck (my first custom deck) but the list has way too many cards and im not sure what to cut or replace, so any recomendations or suggestions will be taken into consideration.
the deck is mainly for playing among friends, and possibly for tournaments
list here:https://archidekt.com/decks/8444758/the_ring_hungers
amber river
Recommendation: Use moxfield
get Wrath of God instead of Fumigate
Your curve caps out at like 3 so
Way less ramp
Brave the Wilds isn't ramp it just replaces itself with a land
Tireless Provisioner isn't ramp
The Ring Goes South is ramp when you dont need it
Moonsilver Key is a tutor
Of Herbs and Stewed Rabbit isn't draw
Your curve is super low so I'd include Dark Confidant
Soul-Guide lantern is gy hate not removal
I wouldn't really consider Finale of Eternity removal
Feed the Cauldron is just a bad removal spell
Claim the Precious is 3 mana sorcery speed creature only removal
Shred memory is bad
For Removal you want Beast Within, Generous Gift, Assassin's Trophy, Anguished Unmaking, Putrefy, Mortify, Stroke of Midnight, Damn, Rite of Oblivion, Vindicate
This gives you 4 any permanent removal
3 non-land removal
2 efficient two mode removal, and 1 spot removal that doubles as a board wipe
Vanishing Verse is also good but typically wont remove commanders
Your draw is thematic and if you like that, that's fine but there are better options
Ramp you can have like Birds of Paradise, Ornithopter of Paradise, Arcane Signet, Sol Ring, Jaheira, Utopia Sprawl, Selesnya Signet, Orzhov Signet
These are generic recommendations ofc, if you want the deck to be thematic then I'd advise for you to keep the thematic choices but some cards are just straight up bad
Shred Memory being one of them, it's far too limited as a tutor, has no thematic relevance, and its actual use is also useless
Corrupted Conviction isn't great either, grab the 2 mana ones that let you sacrifice artifacts
Deadly Dispute for example
If it's in your budget, Mondrak, Ojer Taq, any of the green enchantments that double token creation, and anointed procession
That's all I got
junior saddle
That's all I got
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covert sluice
holy that is a lot to take in
yeah i will defo use atleast 90% of what you have given me
and also if im honest here all of the comments on the categories, most of them are categorized by archidekt sooo
covert sluice
still alot of words im not to sure of
covert sluice
anyother help wil also be apriciated
