Honestly the first and last ones on the new drawing are my favorite because they have many details🖤 The second and third ones on the old drawing, (in my opinion) are better than the new ones. I think that you was mostly focused on creating the new ocs that you forgot to add love into it ( that's what I do). And usually the first design is the best when it comes to ocs <- unpopular opinion
#Old is better than new?
olive plinth
past grail
Honestly the first and last ones on the new drawing are my favorite because they...
Yeah, but I couldn't do much about the third, in the first design the silhouette didn't help to understand that she is literally a bishop from chess.
olive plinth
Well you could leave it as it is. Or what you could do is enhance the details she's holding and give her hair more purpose. And lastly contrast the colors more. It's your decision