#What can I improve on?

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echo drift
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HELLO!! Oko so there's this banner competition for someone's twt acc and I decided to join it and I'm rlly proud with how it came out !! But smth about it is irking me..it's not rlly the colors (but if you have a comment sbout that pls do tell !!) but smth with the lines..? Maybe the lineart on thr characters on the back??? I canr really pinpoint it so any help will be GREATLY appreciated! rogeronion

hollow osprey
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perhaps try to fix up the lines or add another layer of lineart thats a viberant color, or perchance add a few more objects into the background like curtains for the windows? i dont know much about art so sorry if i wasnt too good!

echo drift