sonic pasture
I kinda finished this drawing but my rendering is always so bad x( im looking to take any critique about any part of the piece, the colors, the anatomy, the shapes... just anything you think it could either be improved or that i can have in mind for future pieces.
There is one thing in particular I kinda dislike and its that the face looks rather uninteresting compared to the rest of the piece but i don't know what more i can add to it, my eyes are always so boring x.x
(also i appreciate it a lot if u ping me when u answer so i know :3)
mortal oak
@sonic pasture hi!! Would it be okay for others do draw over your art, or you'd prefer not?
sonic pasture
<@351383997751754753> hi!! Would it be okay for others do draw over your art, or...
yes its fine!
ill post the refs
mortal oak
@sonic pasture Heyy truthfully I think the back was rendered rreally well. Ive just fixed up some things I noticed were off about the face, like Ive moved some things around I just uded liquify select and airbrush
Discords compressed it a lot you may have to zoom in
mortal oak
The little shadowI put to the left of the hair and the right of the eye maybe you should add an ear there or cover it up with hair
mortal oak
Wait is my eye really that far high 😭
No no worries lol I understand you it's tough to spot when you paint for a while and you dont't have a fresh eye I get that
sonic pasture
The little shadowI put to the left of the hair and the right of the eye maybe yo...
I thought It would be covered with the hair, you think part of It should be visible?
sonic pasture
No no worries lol I understand you it's tough to spot when you paint for a while...
its just funny cuz i lowered its position twice during render but It seems It wasnt enough lul
mortal oak
I mean in my one I cut off her face/ upper jaw at a point left of the hair like right around here I think is like more anatomically correct?? 100% im not an expert tho
Im not so sure how to draw an ear from this position tho sorry
sonic pasture
like this prob
sonic pasture
i just wasnt sure if the hair was covering the whole of it
hmm i understand how i messed Up the nose yeah
mortal oak
Yeah I thought the lower plane of the nose was a bit upturned. Ive also moved the jaw upward a lot so it looks like her neck reads a bit better too
I hope I was able to help!! Keep it up it looks real good
If you have an IG i can go ahead and support you too
sonic pasture
i dont really upload much but ty its theleletales and ty for help:3
maybe i try a better position for the eye while keeping It big i kinda wanted a semi anime eye, like semirrealism but.. It turned out boring
chilly gyro
She has a really realistic body and anime face I feel
sonic pasture
She has a really realistic body and anime face I feel
kinda the attempt
but i never get it to be good
tight oyster
I kinda finished this drawing but my rendering is always so bad x( im looking to...
i did a rough paint to define the shape ,this is my view about the back based on head posture sure u have to work more to shape it perfectly .also if u want to paint like arkilide u have to paint less blurry, let the brush strockes to be visible in some parts . I like the face i don't see the need of changing it
sonic pasture
i did a rough paint to define the shape ,this is my view about the back based on...
waaa this is amazing 🥺 the arkilide ref was mostly for the colors/mood i wasnt trying to imitate his style but maybe unconsciously lol
tight oyster
waaa this is amazing 🥺 the arkilide ref was mostly for the colors/mood i wasnt ...
Well the thing is do not do sharp shading where that isn't needed. Like on your back it's looking like a box corner
sonic pasture
the ref i was using had the lowest value shadow on the right scapula and I see you didnt even shadow that part but yours looks good not sure
tight oyster
Add some bright light's spots on the face to make it more 3d
tight oyster
the ref i was using had the lowest value shadow on the right scapula and I see y...
Keep in mind your posture doesn't fit fully the reff u used
sonic pasture
but the back part does or ar least thats was the attempt maybe i did It Wrong ;-; like It should be at least a bit darker or not?
tight oyster
Also women's body is more soft didn't has these sharp edges which men's body has
sonic pasture
that is true maybe the ref just has an extreme lighting set Up that my drawing doesnt really have so i didnt have to go that far
tight oyster
but the back part does or ar least thats was the attempt maybe i did It Wrong ;-...
I didn't got your question😅
sonic pasture
like the biggest diff between your drawing and mine would be the huge shadowed area between the right scapula and the center of the back
the back pose is intended to be the one of the ref
i feel like a middle ground between both drawings would be more accurate? idk
not sure Cuz i basically tried to recreate that specific ref with just the head turned but maybe because the lighting isnt as dramatic in my drawing as It is in the reference i went too extreme when shading that part
tight oyster
not sure Cuz i basically tried to recreate that specific ref with just the head ...
The main problem wasn't in the lightning
But the shape itself
From my point of view that was sick back 😅
Like phiscaly that shadow u added on the right side of the back is way to strong
sonic pasture
yeye thats what I meant
tight oyster
Like a bone try to get out from her back
Darker part allways in intersections between surface's
sonic pasture
i was confused too when analyzing the reference maybe the sense i found in It was Wrong xD
tight oyster
And shade grade has to be divided by shape
tight oyster
i was confused too when analyzing the reference maybe the sense i found in It wa...
If u look closely to the ref you will see the shadow how smooth it's cover the surface
Also when u rise the head to get that posture the back posture it's changing slightly
So the ref can't be fully the same
sonic pasture
maybe i shouldnt use refs that extreme so i can see the Bones and muscles better v.v but thanks for the input ill have everything in mind (:
tight oyster
maybe i shouldnt use refs that extreme so i can see the Bones and muscles better...
It's hard to draw the back 😅 I did a loot of trys during the years . Good luck and use referince which fit fully if u don't understand yet how the movement and posture change the shape
Feel more free to experiment with it u can try to draw once again new art from scratch and after a while u can return to this one and rework it 
tight oyster
oh no i cant draw a single square without reference
It's good to use them that teach u and after a while your brain Library will be full with info which will help u to draw without it 
sonic pasture
its always hard you know, first someone tells u, back is fine, change the face, Then someone tells u the exact opppsite.. But i think i got both points both can be improved a lot