#Figure drawing feedback (MARKUPS REQUIRED)

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sterile bluff
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Just looking on some feedback on these 5 minute figures. Please provide a markup as a visual aid (as well as precaution so I know you know what you're doing). Particularly struggling with connecting the ribcage and pelvis, any tips on how to do that are appreciated, also please ping when you respond. Thank you :)

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desert cargo
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One thing ill say, though idk what reference u used i might just be yapping; is when you are arching your back and leaning/supporting your weight on one leg (image 3 and 4) that weight bearing leg would be more straightened to support the wright of your body

I think you can try to think about how you would stand when you are putting your weight predominantly on one leg, and how the rest of the body might shift as a result

near dirge
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Anddd here's for youuu, hope it helps

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sterile bluff
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I'll explain, I'll have my cup of coffee first tho😂

near dirge
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Alright

  1. The shape of the ribs is a bit small
  2. The distance of the ball joint on the arms and the clavicle is stiff on your attempt.
  3. The right leg appears to look longer than the left on your attempt. Bending it should make the femoral part and the lower leg appear shorter.
  4. Follow the line of the ribs, try and add the mass of the serratus anterior and latissimus dorsi. This side of the body lacks mass on your attempt.

I wish I helped 😁

exotic narwhal
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Buddy can u help with my post too? 🥹🥹🥹 ive been looking for reference for a pose

near dirge
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And also try to study the solid forms of the human body, bones. If you want me to help you with that, just let me know tho. I will try to help when I have free time

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sterile bluff
sterile bluff
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Please tell me where Im weakest and Ill work on it

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