#Something looks off but idk why

15 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)

robust wasp
#

Idk if I’m just staring at it too long but I feel like something is off or missing? Like something is missing to give it that extra oomf? Idk if it’s the composition or the anatomy because I’m pretty confident with the colors… or maybe it truly is the colors idk sos 😭😭

Lmk if you notice anything worth fixing! Feel free to draw over it I don’t mind :3

O included the reference pic as well!

loud fjord
#

from what I see comparing the two, your drawing is showing much more of the other part of the face compared to the reference and the drawing is REALLY cute but it's TOO bright, you should play around w/ the tone corve and whatnot. I'm horrible at explaining but I hope it helps you somehow

#

1 sec i'll show you what I mean

kind panther
#

The elbow holding the bottle. The angle of the upper arm to lower arm is off. Look at your reference, there should be a pinch on the inside of the arm by the elbow, your image is a curve.

loud fjord
#

@robust wasp

#

wow my fix sucks ass

#

ok but

#

the point is

#

the face and colour

robust wasp
#

I’ll try to do the fixes tomorrow

surreal hill