Does this look right?

[merry pendant]

I like to lay down my lights and shadows before rendering, and I just wanted to know if this lighting made sense before I started rendering.

[nimble marsh]

I didn’t not once anything with the layout of the shading but I did notice the colors were a bit muddy. I recommend muting and cooling the colors in hue when you darken. I added some color palettes for that on the side. Also you do great with the jacket, it was that it just dropped very cool in hue in the shading so I added an in between if you need it for soft shadows

[merry pendant]

thank you so much! - this was very helpful!

[nimble marsh]

Of course :D