Need some help with drawing this head looking slightly up! pls tell me what's off

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draw overs appreciated

[main canyon]

I think nose needs to be a bit higher? Also cheek is round then chin is pointy which is why it also looks funky

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would this be better?

[winged vale]

The mouth would be in the middle between the nose and chin and the left eye would become more round from the side + make the line going from the ear more angular

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tyy

hopefully it's a bit better

[main canyon]

Way better! Love your art style btw