I’m working on this drawing but it looks off and idk how to fix it. Maybe the lighting is weird? Or the background is just bad. Please help me make it less chopped
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dim sorrel
rotund latch
I’m working on this drawing but it looks off and idk how to fix it. Maybe the li...
im not a pro so take this like a grain of salt, but the hand pointing herself seems a bit off, and the girl kinda looks like shes floating a inch off the couch, might just be the background too
dim sorrel
Okay I tried to fix the floating thing and the hand just looks weird cause I didn’t render it and stuff yet I think
Idk how to fix the background tho cause my characters are usually just on a white bg 😭😭
dense mauve
Your character also looks stiff because you only have straight lines ad the body ,a human needs muscle + there is no impact from the background on the character (if her leg is over the armrest or her arm is limited in movement because of the chair )
You have a lot of soft shadow blending out the harder mor contrasted shadow but the amount and placement is off ( find the clear light source again and visualize how and where the shadows would be, and the bottom hand is drawing in an odd direction use your own hands as reference
dim sorrel
Your character also looks stiff because you only have straight lines ad the body...
This is the pose reference I was using and the bottom hand looks similar I think 😭
dense mauve
The shadows on that hand are way more contrasted than in your art it’s way darker and also has very lines indicating the fingers trough the hand + the form is also rounder and the fingers gradually get longer
