There's something wrong with it but I can't find out what it is, lf criticism

[proud raptor]

Any help would be much appreciated, thank you!

There's something wrong with it but I can't find out what it is, lf criticism

[pallid kestrel]

I believe it's the body. It looks kind of inhumanly slim or the arm holding the cigarette. As someone who smokes, my arm being that close while trying to smoke would hurt!

[proud raptor]

Thanks!

[onyx hound]

Hihii, sorry for drawing over your art. It's for demonstration. Anyways~ have fun with your art journey!