Criticism allowed! This sketch is for a commission! | Art Club | Page 1

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 12:59 AM

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Please someone help 😭👍

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:15 AM

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Please

safe lintel Mar 1, 2026, 1:26 AM

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why do you want criticism?

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it looks fine with me

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:35 AM

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safe lintel it looks fine with me

It seems off does it not?

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graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:40 AM

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gusty moth Please someone help 😭👍

Im not the right person to say this because i completely skip lineart, but your lines look shaky, not very confident, making it look wobbly, try looking into doing lines with one long stroke or atleast with as least as possible, if you dont get it right the first try, just undo and keep at it until you like it :)

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:41 AM

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graceful parrot Im not the right person to say this because i completely skip lineart, but your ...

Oki! Ill do that & ill update 😄 thanks for the help!

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:41 AM

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Also which app do you use?

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:41 AM

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Ibispaint

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:42 AM

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gusty moth Ibispaint

I recommend cranking up the stabilizer to around 7-10

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This thingy

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:42 AM

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It's on 10 😭

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:42 AM

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If you havent already

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oh then its fine

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:42 AM

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My fingers are just really shakey

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:42 AM

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Haha i get that

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Just try doing it in one fast motion

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So theres less room for shakiness

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Id love to try and help you more but i quite literally despise doing any form of lineart after sketch A_A_sobbing

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So idk much

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:54 AM

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Lmaoo

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Well I made the lines a bit straighter im so tired im gonna sleep

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Ignore the hands again

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:56 AM

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Ah well you dont have to necessarily make the lines straight

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:56 AM

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Neater ig 😭

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 1:57 AM

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If you want i could try to draw over your art with some red lines to show you what i meant, though my artstyle is probably way different so idk if youd like the result 👹

gusty moth Mar 1, 2026, 1:58 AM

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Suree if you want to! I don't mind

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If I don't respond in a while just know im probably asleep

graceful parrot Mar 1, 2026, 2:08 AM

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Ok its not perfect and i didnt do everything

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But i hope it conveys the idea

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Its not very clean lines mb

deep tusk Mar 1, 2026, 5:54 AM

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If u still want a little bit of advice, I suggest u try adding weight to your lines, I noticed tht u used the same brush size for everything except the hands and face and it makes the other parts look kinda off?

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Well you're probably going to colour it and it's gonna be pretty unnoticable but it'll look more proper and professional most of the time if u add it

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Like in brb's version above, u can see line weight difference on the shoulders, collar bone, and hair, and tht really emphasizes the shape/form

#Criticism allowed! This sketch is for a commission!