Can someone help with making hair look better?

[unique canopy]

Do big shapes first

Then you can add those sharp smaller strands

[bitter bloom]

thx 😄

[unique canopy]

This is very important

[bitter bloom]

i tried smh like that 😄

[bitter bloom]

thx

[oak lantern]

also when you start off, use swift lines to indicate the flow of the hair

so you have an idea of how the hair should curl and move