#how to improve the composition of my wip

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this is basically abt 2 astronauts who were tethered together but one of them cut the other off and slowly drifts away, waving goodbye while the other desperately tries to reach for him.

tje glowing behind sad astronaut is actially earth, and happy astronaut was pushing him back to earth while he stays in the darkness, but sad astronaut doesnt want to be there without him, the text is from space song by beach house

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more images related to what im drawing

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idk whats going on in the 5th image unfortunately cause i cant even read this chapter 🥹

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the light haired guy is the happy astronaut and the black haired one is the sad astronaut

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to provide further context

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this is actually sad astronat (soobin)s dream, his dream is that happy astronaut(woori) leaves him, bringing him back to earth while staying in the darkness. this represents him being lonely and fixing soobins problems and not his own

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the tether getting severed shows how soobin thinks hes planning to leave him, despite how theyre connected and depend on eachother

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woori (light haired guy) is smiling because he thinks this is a good thing (for even MORE context that soobin isnt aware of, soobin kills him in the future and wooris tring to prevent that by giving him a good future)

tropic iron
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im laughing as i say rhis but i feel tears well up in my eyes

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i dont think most of what i yapped about is necessary, but it might give ideas on how to improve the composition

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and also the uh cool and depression factor

tropic iron
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ignore the ugly anatomy btw i forgot to say