#Need feedback on character design

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woeful patio
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Hi there, i need your feedback and opinions on anything you could think of on my two characters design

The first character is a mercenary from one of the most highly advanced precursor civilization that no longer exists due to an incident which he caused, set in a post sci-fi universe. He is a human male and a villain. His themes: blackhole, post-apocalyptic, scifi. His perconality: Highly Intelligent - Obsessed - Mysterious - Deceitful - Maddened - Sociopathic - Manipulative - Nihilistic - Cynical - Determined - Patient - Quiet/ Reserved - Work Alone. If possible, could you guys also help provide me with some ideas on how to make his design look a bit more eldritch/divine? Considering he is from a precursor civilization. Much appreciated!

The second character was designed to be a playable character for a concept of a game. The world is set in the wasteland of a post-apocalyptic fantasy, filled with medieval style (mostly greek) buildings and ruins whilst monsters mutated through distorted magic shrieks and howls (kinda like “Arcane” from “Riot” but more sand and monsters and a lot more dreadful). The character is a mix of warrior and nomad who wanders the land, killing monsters, looting ruins and searching for a certain ‘thing’.

Apologies for the potentially bad english grammar
Thank you!

delicate jacinth
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Personally I would change the coloring to a more darker palette

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I read through the description before looking at the character and what came to mind is a darker and more foreboding character.

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For me the white takes away the black hole/villain vibe

woeful patio
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Tysm!! Appreciate your feedback, i originally also intended to paint the outer coat darker, but it just looks kinda off-ish

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I’ll give that a try again next time

delicate jacinth
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These are some color palette examples. You don’t have to use any just wanted to show a better picture of what first came to mind reading the description. (Found the art off of Pinterest. I would give the artist credit but I was unable to find the original creators! )

woeful patio
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Thank you for this!

delicate jacinth
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Np^^ 👍