Im rlly bad at seeing my own mistakes. Can anyone criticise this drawing and try telling me what I can do better. This is a wip so I haven’t added lighting nor have I shaded everything
#Criticise
viscid jay
from first view the face looks great! youve just lost a little detail in the back bun, aswell as the large hat having slightly strange look to it, by that i just mean the angle is off I think! im sure theres a good reference for those sorts of hats as its a weird ' ovall ' shape that you need for that angle, please take it with a grain of salt because I am no expert and thats just what stood out to me, but the face is beautiful and the concept and design look great!
nimble zinc
What sort of hat is she wearing? The hat lays a bit weird on the head to me, but it might just be the hat design
Her chin is very sharp. I would maybe round it out a bit? It looks unnatural. Her neck kinda goes in a bit at the front, on women especially this is not common. I would straighten it out more.
I believe also her the shoulder on our right is coming out too kuch
viscid jay
I also agree with your points, hat shape, and slightly tweaking how her shoulders are resting, aswell as how her neck is connecting to the body , but still the current shading you have on the face in particular looks great. keep us posted on the updated!
also dont be pressured into changing it either! complete it how you are, use it to learn side by side what you want to change and improve on instead of re-doing a whole peice
(and take notes of what you want to improve yourself)
nimble zinc
What sort of hat is she wearing? The hat lays a bit weird on the head to me, but...
I made some changes. Like the other guy said, take them or leave them, I dont mind.
I moved some of the nose and mouth down a bit, usually theres an equal space between the lips to the nose and the lips to the chin.
I also moved her shoulder a bit. I think with some proper shading, you can get it to look how you want.
I didnt touch the hat because I dont know if whats happening is intentional or not 😅
desert forge
What sort of hat is she wearing? The hat lays a bit weird on the head to me, but...
I took inspo form this hat, but I had a hard time drawing it correctly especially in the perspective she was looking at
desert forge
I made some changes. Like the other guy said, take them or leave them, I dont mi...
Omgg tyyy so much for the help! I’ll make sure to take this advice
desert forge
I also agree with your points, hat shape, and slightly tweaking how her shoulder...
Will deff upd yall 😄
viscid jay
oo that hat looks amazing, deffo try get some more of those flowers in there, pink white and red they really make the hat look special!