#Help with mouth/critique/redline

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sour yoke
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Hi! I need some help with the mouth I want it to be smiling but nothing I do looks right. If someone could redline or sketch some ideas on it that would be a huge help
Also if theres any other critiques feel free to let me know!

This is just a sketch for fun so dont mind the messiness

Ref: https://pin.it/5MD6FOznp

storm osprey
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Hello
I can create this for you can we discuss in dm

sour yoke
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This is some kind of bot so im still looking for help if anyone sees this ๐Ÿ’“

sour yoke
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I want something like this but it just looks wrong ๐Ÿ˜ž not sure what it is tho

hollow geyser
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I thought what if she was holding in her laughter and i just did it instead lol. What if she was smirking? Or evil laughter

celest yacht
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I think the reason her expression looks odd is because shes smiling but her eyes aren't

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It makes the expression look fake in a way

sour yoke
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like shes staring at something far away with a kind of crazy smile?

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ill try lifting it!

celest yacht
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I just think that the whole face should be showing off the deranged look to make the expression more interesting to look at if that makes sense?

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So like you could try playing around with the position of the eyebrows to sell the expression as well

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Cause right now imo she's got a gentle happy look