help with facial proportions/anatomy in a difficult angle?

[gloomy stone]

hey guys! looking at the reference, do you have any critique on the facial anatomy/proportions of the figure in the front? 🥹 I feel like its just . so different from the fig. in the back if that makes sense
something ab the face looks almost squished

ref piccie

[exotic path]

Damn that's good

I'll say the hands a are bit smaller

Other than that everything looks fine, let's see how you render it

[trim tendon]

you did good but you have a potential tangent line where the back man grabs the front man on his back, trying lowering where the arm reaches (hand placement is fine just position the elbow)

also the front mans head isnt properly attatched, think of the way the back muscles connect to the neck and how it would connect, look at how the spine crawls up to the back of the skull.

is front man wearing a suit vest?