Face looks off

[slate meteor]

I really hate the girls face and I can't for the life of me figure out how to fix it, mostly the nose but I don't like the eyes either, really 😓

[cunning vale]

remove the facial features and draw wrapping line

[slate meteor]

Scariest thing I've seen all year, is this what you meant? Because these were the guide lines I (attempted to) follow in the sketch

[burnt wharf]

In angles like these you really have to be intent with line hierarchy and structure.

Downward angle: we should be seeing the top lids wrap around the eyeball and we should be seeing less of the bottom lids. Youve drawn them incredibly even which ruins the perspective and makes the eyes look like stickers. Consider this photo for reference

[slate meteor]

Ok I don't know how you found the perfect reference for the EXACT angle I was drawing but I'm thoroughly impressed. Thank you so much 😭