Anatomy things

[solemn frost]

Is it just me or does the pose look a bit stiff?

[fickle lotus]

Imo its already quite good in terms of dynamic (esp the top body part) yet there seems to be so ething off with his right leg

[brazen portal]

its very great already, but i think the pose is off because the hand doesn't seem to need to be there or sum

if the character is attacking sumone the leg will kick him then there is no need for the arm to be extended there

and is the arm is there to launch something like a grappling hook (the thing on his hand is a grapling hook i suppose ,idk tho) his arm should be directed a bit more to the left top

but if its an attack the hand doesn't really need to be there

and i think the left leg (ftom hid point of vier left or right ) should be made a tiny bit directed striaght cause its bending too much

also if u make the changes pls send it here and pin me i wanna look at it after the changes

and personallt make his hair a lil more longer

and also move backward, like on the direction he is going like opposite direction of hid legs, like straight opposite

think of a x axis on his leg like on his bones, and extend it backward and make his hair directly opposite in that line

[solemn frost]

Thanks! Also the thing on his arm is a crossbow

[brazen portal]

ohh then I suppose one small thing is to make his crossbow and his pupil line up so he looks like he is aiming with it. Dont change the direction he is looking but the direction of the arm

also take your time for redrawing it the correct way with everything right. You should take as much time as u need, like days or idk but take your time

[solemn frost]

Yeah I'll take all the time I need for this one

I'm trying to limit test a bit with my art skills so I can compare it to last year

[solemn frost]

@brazen portal Thanks for your feedback! It really helped me to iron things out. Things I changed:

• His right boot is now more visible than before to fix how weird his leg looked before
• I also made his legs a bit thinner in general
• I slightly adjusted the angle of his arm to point more inward.
• I redrew the crossbow because the angle was off before.
• and I added werewolves at the edge of the screen for him to aim at.
  Overall I think I'm just about done with the sketching phase and I'm ready to move on.