spare jetty
I’m trying to draw emu but her expression is uhm.. off. She looks… very traumatized.
I started art 1 month ago after taking a 2 yr break so i’m relearning stuff.
If anyone wants to critique, please do! Draw on my art if you want, actually i’d prefer that
still on rough draft and stuff
i don’t know if i should like change the mouth or eyes
digital mason
I’m trying to draw emu but her expression is uhm.. off. She looks… very traumati...
if its a rough draft then so far it looks good
but imo its the hair
as a stupid young artist
i love it eitherways your goated at it
but im not a critque guy
spare jetty
i just don’t know about the facial expression, looks very weird
she’s like, faking it?
soft vapor
make the irises bigger maybe? smaller irises are used in anime to make a character look scared so ya
also the nose should be a tad bit lower 🙏🙏🙏 looking good so far!!
novel jewel
The reason she looks "traumatized" is because you can see the whites of her eyes on the tops of her eyes, which is common in looks of fear. The mouth looks great tho^^
vagrant cove
a bunch of anime styles tend to show the sclera when smiling//scared, it's mostly the brows & pupil/iris shape that makes the expression either happy or scared/worried
imo it looks good, it's mostly the << eye that's throwing you off
it's rotated way too much & the shape of the iris doesn't match that of the other eye
lower the nose a lil like savitee pinted, make the mouth a little smaller and you should be good 2 go
rotating the canvas everytime u can would help a ton in these situations
novel jewel
a bunch of anime styles tend to show the sclera when smiling//scared, it's mostl...
This is kinda what I was trying to get at /nh
vagrant cove
thing is that if you slap some regular arched brows and a smile to the bottom eyes, it'd look like a regular happy face
digital mason
This is kinda what I was trying to get at /nh
omg the eyes]
i wuv emm
yujmmy sart
novel jewel
Aw ty
novel jewel
thing is that if you slap some regular arched brows and a smile to the bottom ey...
I'm not saying that only eyes do all expression work, it's also eyebrows and mouth, but when isolated you can tell expressions easily with just eyes /nh
spare jetty
The reason she looks "traumatized" is because you can see the whites of her eyes...
I’ll try an adjust it!!
vagrant cove
imo it looks good, it's mostly the << eye that's throwing you off
kind of 
vagrant cove
I'm not saying that only eyes do all expression work, it's also eyebrows and mou...
yeah yeah i gotchu
novel jewel
I’ll try an adjust it!!
Glhf!
spare jetty
kind of <:A_A_eh:1293566930518671422>
Ty!!
spare jetty
The reason she looks "traumatized" is because you can see the whites of her eyes...
Like the big clump?
novel jewel
Like the big clump?
Wdym
novel jewel
kind of <:A_A_eh:1293566930518671422>
Like this and my sketch, the pupils do a lot, especially in anime styles
novel jewel
Which white?
The sclera
spare jetty
Let me look that up lmfao
vagrant cove
novel jewel
This is kinda what I was trying to get at /nh
The heavy lifting (imo) is slightly large, lemme do a quick example
spare jetty
The heavy lifting (imo) is slightly large, lemme do a quick example
should I like make the sclera a little bit less seen?
novel jewel
Tried emulating your style as close as I can, I did two versions
spare jetty
ooooh
spare jetty
Tried emulating your style as close as I can, I did two versions
wait this is so peak
tyy!!
spare jetty
but u made it better hehe
novel jewel
Glhf
digital mason
I’m trying to draw emu but her expression is uhm.. off. She looks… very traumati...
btw may i ask how u draw these type of heads
im aiming for a style like this and id luv to know
spare jetty
btw may i ask how u draw these type of heads
i normally use the loomis head method
You can search it up in youtube!
