‼️CRITIQUE NEEDED. Help for rendering + anatomy

[gusty bane]

Hey!! This piece feels like it falls flat and i feel like their faces are not right especially the eyes. I need help making this more 3D and anatomically correct

[tall sigil]

It's the angles. With the pink haired girl there no way her back is physically touching that wall, it is possible with a lean but with her body turned the same direction as the other it does end up working. Same with there lower bottoms. Head also need to contact the wall in some way, it makes no since that she's so closed and isn't touching it with her head. The foot touch the other girls doesn't work, twist the foot sideways partially or align it with the other foot

[gusty bane]

Thank you so much! No they arent touching the walls theyre just sitting in front of them… i dont really know where the cast shadow from behind them is supposed to go thought to give the impression that theyre sitting in FRONT of the wall

[slim mesa]

your shadows are fairly light and it makes the drawing look a bit flat. here i quickly pushed your shadows and added rim lighting to give more mood

i added more shadow around the corners of the drawing as well to draw more interest to the lighter parts

[gusty bane]

Thank you!!!!

[gusty bane]

What about the anatomy and colors

[gusty bane]

[slim mesa]

Honestly if yojre at the point of changing the anatomy, I would make them closer together, kinda cuddling. I think that'd be cuter. The heads are pretty big, usually they are around ⅓the entire width of the shoulders. But I think it looks fine

Also, maybe open one of their mouths

So they arent just having a staring contest yknow

So it looks like they are having a conversation

[bright rune]

Upper legs feel too long, and the pink haired girl’s furthest leg looks very “rubbery” and less natural due to it bending toward our direction while the knee remains forward facing.

[strong fable]

I don’t have much to say. I just wanted to say I love your drawing 👉👈

[gusty bane]

Thanks so much awww

[gusty bane]

i changed it to this now but still dislike it

[gusty bane]

[tall sigil]

I still think it's the perspective, she basically off the beds edge but isn't interacting with the wall so it doesn't make much sense

[tardy charm]

could be laying on her shoulder

idk, looks fine 2 me